P3B Creative Writing

P3B wrote senses poems about travelling down the chocolate river in Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. Here are some of our finished pieces.

Down the Chocolate River

Down the chocolate river, I see the tiny Oompa Loompa rowing away.

Down the chocolate river, I hear the big brown waterfall.

Down the chocolate river, I touch the big pink sweet boat.

Down the chocolate river, I taste the wind rushing through my face.

Down the chocolate river, I feel the amazing Mr Wonka as he sits next to me.

Down the chocolate river, life is simply amazing.

By Ash K. P3B

 

Down the Chocolate River

Down the chocolate river, I see the melted chocolate.

Down the chocolate river, I hear the Oompa Loompas singing.

Down the chocolate river, I touch the pink sweet boat.

Down the chocolate river, I taste the creamy chocolate.

Down the chocolate river, I feel the sticky chocolate river.

Down the chocolate river, life is amazing.

By Jaxson P3B

 

Down the Chocolate River

Down the chocolate river, I see an Oompa Loompa sliding down the waterfall.

Down the chocolate river, I hear the Oompa Loompa rowing the boat.

Down the chocolate river, I touch brown and creamy chocolate.

Down the chocolate river, I taste the sticky and pinky boat.

Down the chocolate river, I feel the hot chocolate below me.

Down the chocolate river, life is fascinating and delicious.

By Milosz P3B

 

Down the Chocolate River

Down the chocolate river, I see a big black tunnel.

Down the chocolate river, I hear the chocolate river flowing.

Down the chocolate river, I touch a squidgy, widgy marshmallow.

Down the chocolate river, I taste fudgy, wudgey creamy hot chocolate.

Down the chocolate river, I feel a little bit scared.

Down the chocolate river, life is fun, fabulous and fantastic.

By Taylor P3B

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